从评价框架审视教师在书面、音频和截屏反馈中对英语学习者写作的评价性语言:语言学视角

IF 4.2 1区 文学 Q1 EDUCATION & EDUCATIONAL RESEARCH
Murad Abdu Saeed , Atef AbuSa'aleek , Mohammed Abdullah Alharbi
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技术为教师纠正学生的写作提供了便利,但有必要从语言学的角度研究书面、音频和截屏模式如何影响教师对电子(e-)反馈的评价性语言。本研究利用系统功能语言学评价框架中的参与资源,考察了书面、音频和截屏模式对教师在对 15 对沙特 EFL 学习者的写作和文本修改进行电子反馈时的评价性语言的影响。对电子反馈的语言分析表明,在三种电子反馈模式中,教师的参与资源各不相同。具体而言,截屏和音频电子反馈模式以扩展资源(扩大对话空间的资源)为主,而书面反馈模式则以收缩资源(限制/关闭对话空间的资源)为主。此外,音频和截屏反馈模式包含更多的陈述和建议,而书面反馈模式则以命令/指令和建议更正为主。内容分析显示,截屏电子反馈模式解决了更多写作中的全局性问题;然而,音频和书面电子反馈模式解决了更多写作中的局部性问题。尽管截屏电子反馈模式和音频电子反馈模式的总体文本修改成功率更高,但除了学生的全局性文本修改外,没有发现其他显著差异。这项研究为教师有效回应学生的写作提供了有益的教学启示。
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Examining teacher’s evaluative language in written, audio and screencast feedback on EFL learners’ writing from the appraisal framework: A linguistic perspective

Technology facilitates teacher corrective feedback on students' writing, but there is a need to examine how written, audio and screencast modes affect teacher's evaluative language of electronic (e-) feedback from linguistic approaches. By using the engagement resources of the appraisal framework within Systemic Functional Linguistics, this study examined the effect of written, audio and screencast modes on the instructor's evaluative language in his e-feedback on writing and the text revisions of 15 pairs of Saudi EFL learners. The linguistic analysis of the e-feedback revealed that the instructor's engagement resources differed across the three e-feedback modes. Specifically, the screencast and audio e-feedback modes were dominated by expanding resources (resources expanding the space for dialogue) as opposed to the prevalence of contracting resources (resources limiting/shutting down the space for dialogue) in the written feedback mode. Moreover, the audio and screencast feedback modes contained more statements and suggestions whereas the written feedback mode was dominated by commands/orders and suggested corrections. The content analysis revealed that the screencast e-feedback mode addressed a higher number of global issues in writing; however, the audio and written e-feedback modes addressed a higher number of local issues in writing. Despite the higher overall rate of successful text revisions resulting from the screencast and audio e-feedback modes, no significant differences were found except in relation to students' global text revisions. The study offers useful pedagogical implications for instructors in effectively responding to students' writing.

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Assessing Writing
Assessing Writing Multiple-
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期刊介绍: Assessing Writing is a refereed international journal providing a forum for ideas, research and practice on the assessment of written language. Assessing Writing publishes articles, book reviews, conference reports, and academic exchanges concerning writing assessments of all kinds, including traditional (direct and standardised forms of) testing of writing, alternative performance assessments (such as portfolios), workplace sampling and classroom assessment. The journal focuses on all stages of the writing assessment process, including needs evaluation, assessment creation, implementation, and validation, and test development.
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