An Analysis of the Abstracts of EFL Undergraduate Students: Coherence and Cohesion

Q4 Arts and Humanities
Scope Pub Date : 2023-10-16 DOI:10.30998/scope.v8i1.18102
Widhiyanto Widhiyanto, Nurmala Hendrawaty, Lilis Suryani, Mochamad Rizqi Adhi Pratama
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Coherence and cohesion play crucial roles in writing an abstract of an undergraduate thesis. By ensuring the coherence and cohesion of the abstract, EFL undergraduate students can enhance its readability, can facilitate the understanding of the research content, and can enable readers to grasp the main points efficiently. However, EFL undergraduate students often need help achieving coherence and cohesion due to their limitations in understanding and practicing academic writing. The research aims to analyze how the sentences in the abstract are related to one another through logical connections and to identify the cohesive devices like conjunction, reference, substitution, or ellipsis to make the abstract coherent. Three abstracts were chosen randomly from 2020 to 2022. Then, the researchers analyzed the data qualitatively in words or sentences using document analysis. The results show that two out of three abstracts are coherent. It is highly suggested for EFL undergraduates whose abstracts must be more readable to improve cohesive devices and use different conjunction and adverbial sentences. Therefore, the suggestion is that EFL undergraduate students use other transitions to link each sentence to make coherent text.

大学生英语摘要分析:连贯与衔接
<div class="WordSection1">< ><span lang="EN-US">连贯和衔接在撰写本科论文摘要中起着至关重要的作用。通过保证摘要的连贯和衔接,可以提高摘要的可读性,有利于理解研究内容,使读者能够有效地把握要点。然而,由于大学生在学术写作的理解和实践上的局限性,他们往往需要帮助来实现连贯和衔接。研究的目的是分析摘要中的句子是如何通过逻辑联系相互联系起来的,并找出连接、指称、替代或省略等衔接手段使摘要连贯起来。从2020年到2022年,随机抽取3篇摘要。然后,研究人员使用文档分析对单词或句子中的数据进行定性分析。结果表明,三分之二的摘要是连贯的。对于需要提高摘要可读性的大学生,建议提高衔接手段,使用不同的连接句和状语句。因此,建议英语本科学生使用其他过渡语来连接每个句子,使文本连贯。</span></p></div>
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