Students’ Voice on the NET Formative Writing Feedback in Emergency Remote Teaching during the COVID-19 Period

Hui-Wen Huang, Lizhi Hou, Yitong Li, Beth Whitfield
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This study explored students voice on the value of the NET (native English teacher) feedback in EFL students’ collaborative essay writing. The NET feedback included video feedback and e-written feedback. A total of 43 EFL students volunteered to participate in this study. They completed two collaborative essays in the international EFL writing project in the COVID-19 emergency remote teaching semester. Students’ final reflections on the NET feedback were analyzed using content analysis to obtain the results. The findings showed that both video and e-written feedback was beneficial for all the participants in their essay writing improvement. The students in the video feedback group reported that their Chinglish expressions, lack of reading authentic materials, and run-on sentences were top 3 concerns in the NET feedback. The students in the e-written feedback group reported that grammar error, run-on sentences, and improving academic writing were top 3 concerns in the NET feedback. These findings help language teachers understand different feedback designs and consider the pros and cons of different feedback modes. The pedagogical implications of using formative feedback during the writing process in EFL teaching are provided.
新冠肺炎疫情期间应急远程教学中学生对NET形成性写作反馈的意见
本研究探讨了学生对英语母语教师反馈在英语学生合作写作中的价值的看法。NET反馈包括视频反馈和电子书面反馈。共有43名英语学生自愿参与本研究。在新冠肺炎应急远程教学学期的英语国际写作项目中,他们完成了两篇合作论文。利用内容分析法对学生对NET反馈的最终反思进行分析,得出结果。研究结果表明,视频和电子书面反馈对所有参与者的论文写作进步都有好处。视频反馈组的学生反映,他们的中式英语表达、缺乏阅读真实材料和连句是网络反馈中最主要的三个问题。网络反馈组的学生报告说,语法错误、断句和提高学术写作是网络反馈中最关心的三个问题。这些发现有助于语言教师理解不同的反馈设计,并考虑不同反馈模式的利弊。在写作过程中运用形成性反馈的教学意义。
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