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Comparative effects of direct written corrective feedback and AI-generated reformulation on second language learners’ depth of processing and grammatical accuracy
This study employs depth of processing (DoP; Leow, 2015, 2020) to examine the comparative effects of unfocused direct corrective feedback (direct CF) and AI-generated reformulation on second language (L2) learners’ feedback processing and their grammatical accuracy in writing. Thirty-two first-year non-English majors at a private university were divided into two groups: one receiving direct CF (DF group) and the other receiving AI-generated reformulation (AGR group) on their narrative essays. While examining the respective feedback, the participants engaged in written languaging. Learners’ three writing texts (i.e., the first draft, a revision without accessing feedback, and a new piece of writing) were analyzed to assess the accuracy of the target grammatical feature (i.e., the past counterfactual conditional). Language-related episodes were identified in the learners’ written verbalization data to examine their DoP of the feedback on the target structure. The results indicate that the DF group exhibited deeper processing than the AGR group. The analysis of their written products indicates that both groups improved the accuracy of the target feature in their revisions. However, only the DF group showed a significant improvement from their first drafts to their new pieces of writing, while the AGR group did not show such significant improvement.
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This international journal is devoted to the applications of educational technology and applied linguistics to problems of foreign language teaching and learning. Attention is paid to all languages and to problems associated with the study and teaching of English as a second or foreign language. The journal serves as a vehicle of expression for colleagues in developing countries. System prefers its contributors to provide articles which have a sound theoretical base with a visible practical application which can be generalized. The review section may take up works of a more theoretical nature to broaden the background.