Moving Writing Forward Through Peer-Critique Partners

Ebony Lee
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The author describes a simple yet impactful cycle for cultivating greater engagement and agency among students during the writing process. Specifically, the article explains how the implementation of peer-critique partners who provide one another with criterion-based feedback repositions students from mere “passengers” to active “drivers” on the journey to better writing. Feedback is found to “increase [students’] effort, motivation, and engagement and reduce the discrepancy between the current status and the goal” (Hattie & Clarke, 2019, p.3). The key is having clearly defined writing criteria that inform students of the goals or expectations for writing. These expectations should frame the feedback (e.g., comments, critiques, suggestions, and questions) provided from one peer to the next and move students beyond mere editing to true revision. Traditional commentary such as “excellent,” “good job,” or “more work is needed,” or over-concentration on mechanical errors is insufficient to move writing forward, closer to the desired outcome. Moreover, the article highlights four steps for effectively establishing peer-critique feedback partners. These steps are powerful drivers for helping students move their writing forward by implementing a true revision process. The article opens and concludes by emphasizing that writing is the evidence of thinking. For students to become more thoughtful in their written expression, they must have clarity, support, accountability, and some choice in the process.
通过同行评论伙伴推动写作向前发展
作者描述了一个简单而有效的循环,在写作过程中培养学生更大的参与度和能动性。具体来说,这篇文章解释了同行评议伙伴的实施是如何为彼此提供基于标准的反馈,将学生从单纯的“乘客”重新定位为积极的“司机”,从而实现更好的写作。反馈被发现可以“增加[学生的]努力、动机和参与,减少现状和目标之间的差异”(海蒂&;克拉克,2019年,第3页)。关键是要有明确的写作标准,告诉学生写作的目标或期望。这些期望应该构成从一个同学到另一个同学的反馈(例如,评论、批评、建议和问题),并使学生从单纯的编辑转变为真正的修改。传统的评论,如“优秀”、“干得好”或“还需要做更多的工作”,或过分关注机械错误,不足以推动写作向前,更接近预期的结果。此外,文章强调了有效建立同行批评反馈伙伴的四个步骤。这些步骤是通过实施真正的修改过程来帮助学生推进写作的强大驱动力。文章开头和结尾都强调写作是思考的证据。为了让学生在书面表达中变得更加深思熟虑,他们必须在这个过程中有清晰、支持、责任和一些选择。
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