Engaging EFL Learners in Online Peer Feedback on Writing: What Does It Tell Us?

Murad Abou Saeed, Kamila Ghazali, Sakina Sahuri Suffian Sahuri, M. Abdulrab
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Aim/Purpose The current case study aimed to investigate the engagement of nine English as foreign language (EFL) learners in online peer feedback on writing in a Facebook group. Specifically, the study focused on the issues of writing addressed in peer feedback and the learners' perception of peer feedback in the Facebook group. Background Peer feedback on writing has attracted the attention of many researchers and in-structors of writing in English as second/foreign language (ESL/EFL) contexts. More recently, the application of synchronous and asynchronous technologies, including Facebook, has been reported to foster ESL/EFL learners' engagement in peer feedback. Yet, in the EFL university context, the teacher/instructor still represents the sole resource of feedback, while learners are only passive receivers of feedback. Therefore, it is necessary to encourage EFL learners to be providers of feedback by engaging them in peer work in writing. Methodology The study was conducted among nine EFL Arab learners beyond the university writing course. As an extension to enhance their writing in the Facebook group, the activities of peer feedback reported in this study were monitored by the course instructor for three months. The learners' interactional feedback exchang-es, text revisions, and written reflections were qualitatively analyzed and the pat-terns of interaction were quantified. Contribution The findings contribute to the previous body of knowledge about the role of peer feedback, as well as the application of how asynchronous technological tools such as Facebook facilitate learners' interactional feedback exchanges in writing. Findings The learners engaged in interactional feedback exchanges in the revision-oriented discourse (n=1100 (64%)). These comments triggered global text revisions focus-ing on content, organization, and argumentative genre (n=533 (31%)) and local text revisions focusing on language and mechanics/conventions (n=567 (33%)). The learners also engaged in the non-revision-oriented discourse (n=620 (36%)) that focused on establishing group cohesion in terms of a friendly social context, social support, socialization, social ties, and attachment among them. The learners also perceived the Facebook group as an interactive learning environment that facilitates their peer feedback on writing beyond the university context. Recommendations for Practitioners The findings of the current study underlie useful pedagogical implications for EFL instructors and lecturers as well university students, specifically how peer feedback can be used by instructors as a way to enhance learners' writing skills. Moreover, with the increasing access to social networks such as Facebook groups, EFL learners can engage themselves in peer feedback activities beyond the uni-versity writing courses for further development in writing. Recommendation for Researchers Significant insights on EFL learning may be gleaned from analysing peer feedback on learning activities, which are easily facilitated by commonly available social networks such as Facebook. Hence, researchers who are interested in this domain are encouraged to look beyond the traditional teaching medium. Impact on Society The use of social networks (including Facebook groups) for educational purposes has received much attention from university learners worldwide. This research can facilitate people's awareness of the value of such networks in creating learning opportunities outside the university context. Future Research Future research could combine both synchronous and asynchronous technologies in peer feedback and focus on the effect of peer feedback on each learner's writing.
让英语学习者参与在线同伴写作反馈:它告诉我们什么?
目的/目的本案例研究旨在调查9名英语作为外语(EFL)学习者在Facebook小组中对写作的在线同伴反馈的参与情况。具体来说,本研究关注的是同伴反馈中写作的问题,以及Facebook小组中学习者对同伴反馈的看法。写作的同伴反馈已经引起了英语作为第二语言/外语(ESL/EFL)写作研究人员和教师的关注。最近,同步和异步技术的应用,包括Facebook,已经被报道可以促进ESL/EFL学习者参与同伴反馈。然而,在大学英语教学中,教师/讲师仍然是唯一的反馈来源,而学习者只是被动的反馈接受者。因此,有必要鼓励英语学习者通过参与同伴写作工作来提供反馈。研究对象为9名大学写作课程之外的阿拉伯语学习者。作为加强他们在Facebook小组中的写作的延伸,本研究中报告的同伴反馈活动由课程讲师监测三个月。对学习者的互动反馈交流、文本修改和书面反思进行定性分析,并对互动模式进行量化。这些发现有助于之前关于同伴反馈作用的知识体系,以及异步技术工具(如Facebook)如何促进学习者以书面形式进行互动反馈交流的应用。发现学习者在修订导向语篇中进行了互动反馈交流(n=1100(64%))。这些评论引发了关注内容、组织和论证类型的全球文本修订(n=533(31%))和关注语言和机制/惯例的本地文本修订(n=567(33%))。学习者还参与了非修订导向的话语(n=620(36%)),这些话语侧重于在友好的社会环境、社会支持、社会化、社会联系和依恋方面建立群体凝聚力。学习者还认为Facebook小组是一个互动的学习环境,可以促进他们在大学背景之外的写作方面的同伴反馈。对实践者的建议当前研究的发现对英语教师、讲师和大学生的教学具有重要意义,特别是教师如何利用同伴反馈来提高学习者的写作技能。此外,随着人们越来越多地使用Facebook等社交网络,英语学习者可以在大学写作课程之外参与同伴反馈活动,以进一步提高写作水平。对研究人员的建议可以从分析同伴对学习活动的反馈中获得对外语学习的重要见解,这很容易通过Facebook等常见的社交网络来促进。因此,鼓励对这一领域感兴趣的研究人员超越传统的教学媒介。将社交网络(包括Facebook群组)用于教育目的受到了全世界大学学习者的广泛关注。这项研究可以促进人们意识到这种网络在创造大学之外的学习机会方面的价值。未来的研究未来的研究可以结合同步和异步技术的同伴反馈,并关注同伴反馈对每个学习者写作的影响。
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