二语写作中学生与同伴反馈的互动:反思性日记和复习实践的启示

IF 5.4 3区 材料科学 Q2 CHEMISTRY, PHYSICAL
Zhe (Victor) Zhang , Ken Hyland
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摘要

近年来,学术写作中对同伴反馈的大量研究在很大程度上忽视了学生的复习过程——学生如何利用这种反馈来复习他们的课文,以及为什么在他们的课文中做出某些改变。换句话说,学生在复习中参与同伴反馈的认知维度鲜为人知。本研究利用多份学生草稿、同行对这些草稿的反馈、反思性期刊和对学生的采访,考察了两名二语学生如何利用同行的反馈进行修改。我们发现,两名参与者在修订过程中存在很大差异,并确定了两种参与模式:以自我监管的修订实践为特征的深度参与和与其他受监管的修订操作相关的表面参与。我们不仅对学生在草稿中的复习操作感兴趣,还对他们在老师布置的反思日记中的反思实践感兴趣。研究表明,学生对同伴反馈的有效参与在很大程度上取决于他们在复习过程中如何使用认知和元认知策略。该研究建议教师寻求提供教学支架,以促进学生对二语写作的认知参与和同伴反馈。
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Student engagement with peer feedback in L2 writing: Insights from reflective journaling and revising practices

The torrent of research into peer feedback in academic writing in recent years has largely overlooked student revision process – how individual students engage with this feedback to revise their texts and why certain changes are made in their texts. In other words, the cognitive dimension of student engagement with peer feedback in revision is little known. Drawing on multiple student drafts, peer feedback on these drafts, reflective journals and interviews with students, this study examines how two L2 students engage with peer feedback to conduct revisions. We found that the two participants differed considerably in their revision processes and identified two patterns of engagement: deep engagement, characterized by self-regulated revising practices, and surface engagement, concerned with other-regulated revision operations. We were not only interested in students’ revision operations in their drafts, but also their reflective practices in their reflective journals that their teacher had assigned. The study suggests that effective student engagement with peer feedback largely depends on how they make use of cognitive and metacognitive strategies in the revision process. The study recommends that teachers seek to provide instructional scaffolding to facilitate student cognitive engagement with peer feedback on L2 writing.

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ACS Applied Energy Materials
ACS Applied Energy Materials Materials Science-Materials Chemistry
CiteScore
10.30
自引率
6.20%
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1368
期刊介绍: ACS Applied Energy Materials is an interdisciplinary journal publishing original research covering all aspects of materials, engineering, chemistry, physics and biology relevant to energy conversion and storage. The journal is devoted to reports of new and original experimental and theoretical research of an applied nature that integrate knowledge in the areas of materials, engineering, physics, bioscience, and chemistry into important energy applications.
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