{"title":"Bullet points","authors":"Alison Wilcox","doi":"10.4324/9781003190509-28","DOIUrl":null,"url":null,"abstract":"Quantitative Analysis of the Labs Writing bullet points is difficult in that the words must all count – there is not space for a lot of fluff. Attached are samples and guidance from previous semesters. Task: Describe the characteristics of the diabetic population as a function of age. Figure 1. Overall percentages of diabetics in the US What is required? Explain the trends of different age groups (analysis as a function of age), rather than saying one is below the other one. Address the trend of the \" 64-75 \" age group and the \" 75 or older \" age group, as the \" 75 or older \" age group is the oldest but has a lower percentage of diabetes than the \" 65-74 \" age group. As the population ages, people are more susceptible to diabetes, however the age group \" 65-74 \" has diagnosis greater percentage of diagnosed cases of diabetes than the age group of \" 75 or older \". A possible explanation is that many people who were diagnosed with diabetes died before age 75.","PeriodicalId":112390,"journal":{"name":"Descriptosaurus Punctuation in Action Years 4–6","volume":"43 1","pages":"0"},"PeriodicalIF":0.0000,"publicationDate":"2021-07-30","publicationTypes":"Journal Article","fieldsOfStudy":null,"isOpenAccess":false,"openAccessPdf":"","citationCount":"1","resultStr":null,"platform":"Semanticscholar","paperid":null,"PeriodicalName":"Descriptosaurus Punctuation in Action Years 4–6","FirstCategoryId":"1085","ListUrlMain":"https://doi.org/10.4324/9781003190509-28","RegionNum":0,"RegionCategory":null,"ArticlePicture":[],"TitleCN":null,"AbstractTextCN":null,"PMCID":null,"EPubDate":"","PubModel":"","JCR":"","JCRName":"","Score":null,"Total":0}
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Quantitative Analysis of the Labs Writing bullet points is difficult in that the words must all count – there is not space for a lot of fluff. Attached are samples and guidance from previous semesters. Task: Describe the characteristics of the diabetic population as a function of age. Figure 1. Overall percentages of diabetics in the US What is required? Explain the trends of different age groups (analysis as a function of age), rather than saying one is below the other one. Address the trend of the " 64-75 " age group and the " 75 or older " age group, as the " 75 or older " age group is the oldest but has a lower percentage of diabetes than the " 65-74 " age group. As the population ages, people are more susceptible to diabetes, however the age group " 65-74 " has diagnosis greater percentage of diagnosed cases of diabetes than the age group of " 75 or older ". A possible explanation is that many people who were diagnosed with diabetes died before age 75.